9/01/2006

Reflection

In a moment,
the river robed

in cloud,

a small bird
dives into

a deceitful
ending.

2 comments:

Anna May Smith said...

I like this it is deep and mysterious, You seem like you have had some hard times, your pain speaks through your words.

Anonymous said...

perhaps the previous commentator is correct, but these verses go beyond the hard times to a
'river robed'
and perhaps the 'ending'
it foretells is
really the augury
of a happy destiny.
Who knows?
if life is death,
or death life?
But yes, this poetry
adds a strength and courage
unsaid.